Need Help Checking English to German Translation for CV/Resume

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Hi everyone,

I'm applying for a change of canton to Zurich and the authorities there need a copy of my CV/Resume in German. I tried doing this myself using Google Translate and was hoping a German speaker here could help read my translation and see if it all makes sense.

Here is my attempt at a German translation:

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Here is the original English text:

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I tried to simplify and shorten sentences so it passes through the translator better. There are also some terms which I couldn't find how to say in German, so I left those in English.

Any help or advice is greatly appreciated!

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Maybe upload it again without your name?

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If it's just for moving from one Gemeinde to another, it seems plenty good enough for that. If you needed a German version in order to apply for a job then it might be a different matter. In that case, I think you'd need a translator with technical understanding of your particular skills.

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I would also says it is good enough for the purpose.

I suggest to submit the English version as well.

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Good point. I will edit it.